Rust

The metal shines. Rust doesn’t shine.

The ferris wheel looks like it belongs in a movie where everything always ends well and everyone speaks unknown foreigner words. The machines are not safe here. They shine and that hides the rust.

I still get on. Maybe it will hold, like in a movie.

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Written for Grammar Ghoul Press Shapeshifting 13 #12

Second place for this little story of rusty machinery.
Raúl can make it work just fine again, give him a minute. Or two.

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3 thoughts on “Rust

  1. Ooh! I like how you tell this story, and then the person gets on the ride with hope and you leave us wondering what happens. Just splendid! Great job, my friend!

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  2. Pingback: Grammar Ghoul Press » Shapeshifting 13 Winners of #12 Challenge

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